For the next article assignment I have to write a profile article and I find it tricky because I have to make people interested in a person I find interesting. I think the trick maybe to choose someone that is already very interesting. I had an idea to do a profile on one of my professors, Dr. Stephanie Zarus. The first reason she is fascinating to me because she started an innovative pharmaceutical business. Prof. Flanagan said she doesn’t know Dr. Zarus well but from what she has heard Dr. Zarus has wealth of knowledge, and that Mayes College is fortunate to have her.
I like your approach to writing the profile. I haven't heard of this woman you speak of, which is surprising since she has accomplished so much.
ReplyDeleteThe only suggestion I have for improvement is adding "a" between "has" and "wealth" in the last sentence, and perhaps not using both "tricky" and "trick" in the beginning, because it is a tad repetitive. Instead of "tricky" you could go with a word such as "difficult."
I hope your article went well!